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Two sides of Broken trust

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Jul 2003 · Edited 25 Jul 2003 · 3 comments

You will never be You will never see This and that out Of time of reality You will never cry You will never try You will never see What you meant to me Tell me what you want to be I can tell you any thing If you really want to be with me You will never ever see What you really mean to me If you really want to be with me Don't you never ever fear? I will always wait right here If you really want to be with me Falling down through the different times Of non considerably dysfunctional families You have never tried, to be different from the rest Yaw should have tried your best You've gone down and you can’t see now You’re nothing to me, your just cloud, and you’re nothing Nothing could ever take you back From the distant that you left me in the black, babe Nothing is now, nothing is what you see Nothing is gone; nothing is what it’s meant to be Life is not exactly what it seems to me

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3 comments

[n/a] horus8 25-Jul-03/9:32 PM Reply
Oh lord, I better put my galoshes on, it's getting deep in here.
[8] LosT SykoPath 26-Jul-03/1:47 PM Reply
im nothing to you...
just a blurr in the back of your mind
lost ...not to be found
[8] Craychus 26-Jul-03/9:37 PM Reply
this sounds really sincere and deep.. 8.