poemranker ::neverland by crwncka1

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Free verse № 57580

neverland

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Jul 2003 · 1 comment

in the darkness I sleep, where i am not alone, as my dreams take me, to this place that is warm, without care or worry I go, resting away from the real, other world that is cold, but when not awake I feel, inside that it should be real, as across in this land of none, hiding away like a stranger, I hold on for dear life, as the things I see, feel so deeply real, in this world I imagine, that I hope one day to awake, and it forever be my view, of the world I live in

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[n/a] horus8 25-Jul-03/9:59 PM Reply
Amazing, it's like a maze through down syndrome.