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Demonic Chef

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Jul 2003 · 6 comments

my calm reflection brings forth recollection of my youth: maman screaming, me secretly dreaming my own reality in salty tears words, like knives smears them across my face, im being buttered, cheek burnt toast honey dipped roast cooked to what she thought was perfection being a healthy pig rejection was the result mutated into a demon when i wished to be an angel

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[8] DurtKL 28-Jul-03/10:33 AM Reply
"of my youth"
how old are you?
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › DurtKL 28-Jul-03/12:42 PM Reply
seventeen. Not much of my life i would call childhood. -shrug-
[8] DurtKL 28-Jul-03/10:33 AM Reply
mr piggy
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › DurtKL 28-Jul-03/3:51 PM Reply
oink. im now a boar with horns. ;)
[n/a] horus8 28-Jul-03/12:24 PM Reply
Good drugs will take a good person a good ways away. Good. "maman" priceless, really, exceptional.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › horus8 28-Jul-03/12:41 PM Reply
i think its really sposed to be mamman.. but she doesn't deserve the proper name.