Perfection

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Aug 2003 · 3 comments

Your eyes, Your hair, Your face. Perfection that can not be described. When you smile, You light up the room. Your presence in a room alone Can bring up people's day. To control a whole atmosphere, Is a sign of pefection alone. A perfection that can only be reached by a few. You have reached it, reached perfection from the start.

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[8] SupremeDreamer 2-Aug-03/1:58 PM Reply

cherry on top of a well iced cake..
wheres the meat? heh. 8.

[7] http://mulberryfairy 2-Aug-03/7:31 PM Reply

Keep thinking. "When you smile,
You light up the room." has been written by every
poet in their early work, but you can think of a different, better metaphor.

[7] Bachus 3-Aug-03/3:05 PM Reply

Hmm mm. Well, it's odd and a bit tingly.