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Haiku № 59073

Paintball's Flight

by loneshadow29

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Aug 2003 · 4 comments

Streaks of color fly Those rainbow orbs soaring free Striking worthy foes

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4 comments

[6] Shardik 3-Aug-03/7:35 PM Reply
Cocaine John Travolta Hallucinations
[3] eliastemplar 4-Aug-03/5:07 AM Reply
You make paintball seem so beautiful. I feel a lump in my throat.
[9] cleverdevice 4-Aug-03/7:06 AM Reply
I got hit on the mask playing paintball once, I stumbled around, into a tree nearly knocking me out, and into the enemies base. My god that was a painful weekend, and as a frequent visitor to dominatris I know real pain. Hmmm, cheese grater on the cock.
[9] LuckyJoe 4-Aug-03/5:48 PM Reply
I'm not much about Haiku's but you do give good vision about painballs. I'll give a 9.