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A gift

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Aug 2003 · 9 comments

A Gift I want to thank you For all that you are You always went the distance And never thought it was too far. You were the one who always listened To what i had to say You were always there To help in each and every way The one i could laugh with Every day before school The one who didn’t care If i made you look like a fool. You never turned away When i told you my fears Just sat there and listened And wiped away my tears. Before i met you I prayed every night That God would send me someone To make everything right. Hes sent me an angel You may not know who But look inside the mirror And you’ll see that it’s you.

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9 comments

[n/a] Birdman42s 12-Aug-03/10:32 AM Reply
I wrote this for my best friend on her 18th birthday.
[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> 17-Aug-03/6:32 PM Reply
You always make me giggle.
[3] god'swife 18-Aug-03/10:35 AM Reply
Nice sentiment, terrible poem.
[3] Settle 20-Aug-03/5:54 AM Reply
SHUT UP
[4] J.B. Manning 20-Aug-03/11:47 AM Reply
kind of cliche'
[n/a] VorioBuche 26-Aug-03/3:40 PM Reply
who invited the 16 year old suburban kids?
[6] deleted user 27-Aug-03/12:42 PM Reply
nice
[8] electroman1979 2-Sep-03/10:09 PM Reply
great poem, i like it
[7] Amythest 9-Sep-03/7:11 PM Reply
Well Done :)