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Free verse № 6080

diving

by keatsImnot

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

THE SERENITY BENEATH THE SEA THE SILENT CALM TRANQUILITY IT SOOTHES MY MIND IT PURGES ME OF ALL MY SOULS HOSTILITY WHEN I FLY THROUGH WATERS BLUE THROUGH SHOALS OF FISH OF BRILLIANT HUE A THOUSAND COLOURED CORAL TOO I'M IN A WORLD THAT SEEN BY FEW FOREVER I SHOULD LIKE TO DWELL IN THIS WORLD BENEATH THE SWELL WITH DOLPHIN TURTLE SHARK AND SHELL AND STAY ENCHANTED IN IT'S SPELL

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[4] pete 26-Jul-02/4:23 AM Reply
the first two and a half lines made me laugh with its superposition of image forms (...screaming tranquility at us )..
[7] horus8 14-Aug-02/5:37 PM Reply
de capitilize..and quit screaming..it would be so much better underwater quitely rendered 7/10. hocus.jaundice.lice.malicey
[10] Mystictwilight 15-Sep-04/11:39 AM Reply
wow..this one is very good