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Free verse № 60900

Census

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Aug 2003 · 2 comments

I've heard it so many times it's become embedded in my head, rotating like a wheel. Mom was right when she said I'd never amount to much and others agreed. The census is in: "He'll never succeed."

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 16-Aug-03/10:48 PM Reply
Maybe, like me, you're meant for a higher calling. Like for instance: Murder?
[8] J.B. Manning 20-Aug-03/12:55 PM Reply
Hmmm I like the flow and message of this poem.