poemranker ::Misery by justjay

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Free verse № 60978

Misery

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Aug 2003 · 1 comment

Desperation- Loathing- Pain- Heartache. I can't hold on- it's all familiar- seeking out what i can't find. Mind boggling dizziness- engulfed by fear unknown. A phobia to the heart- which is soon to explode. Loss of breath- which i seem to never control. The pain of it all- must be circummed too . . .

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[5] Lifeboatman 17-Aug-03/7:59 PM Reply
more descriptions... try to make it flow...5