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My Angel

by emilys369

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Jul 2002 · Edited 26 Mar 2003 · 13 comments

My angel has came to me, right down from the sky. He gave me his wings, and taught me to fly. He came to me like, a breath of fresh air. To be without him a second, just wouldn't be fair. His hugs are so gentle, His kisses so sweet. He's done everything possible, to sweep me off my feet. He's never afraid, to say what comes from his heart. I knew I'd be with him, right from the start. He put the light in my life, and showed me to see. I wouldn't change a thing about him, he's perfect to me. I think of him always, twenty-four seven. I know he will always be, my angel from heaven.

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13 comments

[1] razorgrin 26-Jul-02/10:22 AM Reply
glad you're happy.
[10] bluehearts12 26-Jul-02/12:45 PM Reply
this poem may not mean so much to other people, but if it means this much to you and comes from your heart then i say awesome poem!!
[6] [mojo] 26-Jul-02/12:46 PM Reply
If you're new to writing keep it up!
[1] horus8 26-Jul-02/1:12 PM Reply
COME ON EVERYONE LET'S ALL NAME OURSELVES AFTER ANGELS AND WRITE ANGEL SONGS AND POEMS AND USE ANGEL SOFT TOILET PAPER AND EAT ANGEL FOOD CAKE. i'm out for blood now you scrotum strokers. i'm on an angel hunt. sound the trumpets.
[10] iowajerms 27-Jul-02/4:28 PM Reply
i really like this poem. and don't worry about what horus8 says. he told me that i should be skinned alive because i used the word angel. oh well.
[10] iowajerms 27-Jul-02/4:28 PM Reply
i really like this poem. and don't worry about what horus8 says. he told me that i should be skinned alive because i used the word angel. oh well. i give u a 10
[1] razorgrin 27-Jul-02/4:39 PM Reply
Horus most certainly did not! I did! angels..why not succubi or goblins?of all the cheesy, hackneyed shite...angels.the next angel poem i see, i'm hunting down the author and eating their internal organs, raw and dripping out of thier body cavity.
[9] Blake 16-Aug-02/9:13 AM Reply
I hadn't gotten around to looking at your work before, Emily...Nicely done!...I'm curious..how long do you usually take to write?
[7] Tarquin De La Bog 19-Aug-02/5:13 PM Reply
Sweet stuff. 7. Written with a child-like innocence, this is nice. This could still certainly be found in greeting cards, but at least they wouldn't be naff ones.
[6] PawnedTidal 30-Sep-02/5:39 PM Reply
Not bad. I'd be interested to read more.
[1] Stephen Robins 28-Mar-03/1:29 AM Reply
cack.
[1] Stephen Robins 28-Mar-03/1:30 AM Reply
In fact I will go further than that, this poem is a bag of horseshite which I think Justin Timberlake would think about twice before singing.
[10] Shuushin 28-Jan-04/1:25 PM Reply
OMG - this is precious:

"I think of him always,
twenty-four seven.
I know he will always be,
my angel from heaven."