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Waves (2)

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Aug 2003 · 9 comments

One moment a sliver of infinity like reflections of two facing mirrors, a single pane of glass Return to me, singing all at once forever a single voice multiplied, as thick as it is thin

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[10] RGallet 19-Aug-03/6:13 PM Reply

I like the use of rhyme.

[n/a] minuteswithu 19-Aug-03/6:15 PM Reply

Hi, my name is Rich and I find Rob Lowe incredibly sexy (Hi Rich)

[n/a] TanHand 19-Aug-03/6:19 PM Reply

Jeremi told me I was a lesbian. He knows so much about these things. And in response to the second stanza, do you know how fucking hard it is to find a place right now?? This girl wanted me to live in her living room, now she's moving out. Sweet Jesu, sweet Jesu Glace cut in chunks and whipped into Calvanist roulade filling, this is frustrating.

[n/a] Bachus 19-Aug-03/9:57 PM Reply

I hate you and your little dog too.

[n/a] TanHand › Bachus 20-Aug-03/6:57 PM Reply

Wait is your muse your whole genital region or just the shaft??

[n/a] Rilke4ClosetLesbians › TanHand 22-Aug-03/12:39 AM Reply

Because of this comment, I wrote a new poem...

[n/a] TanHand › Rilke4ClosetLesbians 22-Aug-03/10:24 AM Reply

Am I the only one not surprised at how familiar R.M. Rilke is with choking it down?? See, you all made fun of me when I said he was homotic, but the proof is in the pudding.

[7] Bobjim 14-May-04/11:22 AM Reply

Wow. Almost deep and meaningful. But not quite. 7

[8] patty t 26-Apr-06/5:14 PM Reply

cool