Join With Me

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 6 comments

I want to hear your breath quicken and feel your nipples harden against mine Lay with me in the darkness Gently stroking what is yours now As I explore the warmth of your folds My fingers deeper into your moist treasure You surrender as I enter Two becoming one, the beast with two backs Your heartbeat and mine become one rhythm The rhythm of love, the rhythm of life We are close now, you and I Softness and hardness united in one goal We are there now, two quakes, two exhausted and too weak Come now, join with me jc062701

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[2] anonymous 30-Jun-01/9:22 PM Reply

this must be about doing the laundry

[2] anonymous 8-Jul-01/1:06 PM Reply

the beast with two backs, eh? othello... well done..

[2] anonymous 15-Jul-01/10:40 PM Reply

Reminds me of the first time my lover and I made love...:)

[2] anonymous 10-May-02/6:04 PM Reply

Some people write entire novels of this stuff and get paid. You should consider doing that instead of trying to pass this off as poetry.

[2] anonymous 13-May-02/5:20 AM Reply

No thanks.

[6] shwenatjadeflower 12-Jul-02/1:05 AM Reply

sexy.