poemranker ::Doorbells by Birdpia

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Free verse № 62021

Doorbells

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Aug 2003 · Edited 29 Aug 2003 · 0 comments

As the dawn going, the Sun was reaching the sky I was alone in the lonely street, thinking of your smile Doubt inside myself made me awake all the time I didn't know what to do, I was dreaming on my bike As morning came, I wonder Whether the you I longed was feeling better Whether the you leaving me, was going farther I was like a child losing my tendency, Lost in the familiar city Just like the doubt you heard the doorbells ring, Wondering who was before your entrance Could it be someone you longed the most, Could it be the surprise you never knew? Just like playing with the doorbells, Wondering if there was someone in the house Doubt inside myself is increasing as, I also wondered if I could be caught When I was before your entrance, Door was opened before I could play doubt with your doorbells Letter was left on the table, And drops of tears wet your writting..

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