poemranker ::Wallet by Birdpia

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Free verse № 62022

Wallet

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Aug 2003 · 0 comments

It was hard to forget you, Because you left me all the pains, that incurable Time just passed so fast, I could no more see your shadow around the park, Instead memories were aching me, Aching the wound that had no scar That made me remember of your shining star When my wallet went empty, None of myself looked good to you, You left me all alone, Just like the withering flowers, Which the insects ignored When my wallet went empty, I filled it with all my memories with you Though it has no value to everyone else, It was where I hid your odor, your love When I picked up a wallet in the lonely park, I remembered your innocent eyes over me, You might want to say sorry, But I would be grateful instead, as you at least, Had taught me a good lesson on how not be so plain

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