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Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Aug 2003 · Edited 28 Aug 2003 · 3 comments

Fallen from the rift Product of the terror all celebrated beamed and rose death is forever Despondent vicious tense Abstraction of the terror your satiation is complete lies are forever

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[0] Don-Quixote 28-Aug-03/2:54 PM Reply

and you dare to belittle my poems? crawl back into your fucking hole you worthless fraud. 0

[n/a] Crakyamuni › Don-Quixote 28-Aug-03/3:35 PM Reply

I challenge thee to a duel, mesieur.0

[n/a] Y2kSlamPoet › Crakyamuni 28-Aug-03/4:20 PM Reply

what.. your going to duel me with your 8th grade remarks.. *laugh* oh please.. your not worth the time, or effort, and i wouldnt enjoy beating on the retarded and sexually depraved.