Here,s a 0 for the bitch in a tree
For all the 0's she's given me
I don't care for her her shit I have to say
But when giving her 0's I don't go out of my way
But now I'm playing the game she plays.
She looks at the best of the poems here
Then hands me 0's like she has no fear.
It's not the content
or the rhythm that gets her bent
Or maybe it is
How the FUCK would we know
if she doesn't leave a comment.
But that's just like our friend
To leave the worst possible vote
Like the poem could be written
by her sex partner the goat.
Well, you see, she did leave a comment. Then she proceeded to give a zero without a comment. When it falls within a minute, it's fairly obvious. I know I rambled at the end, but 0's without comments really pissssssss me off. There are 1's and 2's etc. If you think a poem sucks bad enough to deserve a 0, then it must be the shittiest poem ever built. This one happened to have several 10's. So, are we to assume that razorgrin--No, let's not make assumptions. Would you care to read my last three posted? Thank you.
So she left a comment but didn't leave a comment? Would you please at least try to make a little sense?
A 0 does not indicate the worst poem ever built. It represents a remarquably bad poem. And though I don't always concur with my dear friend razorgrin's opinions -- she has made some truly dreadful judgements in the past, both in likes and dislikes -- I'm afraid I must concur that in this case she was right. That WAS a terrible poem you wrote. The fact that a lot of idiotic young goths with bad tastes gave your poem tens does not mean it's a good poem. It means that a lot of young goths have no taste. That's all.
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For all the 0's she's given me
I don't care for her her shit I have to say
But when giving her 0's I don't go out of my way
But now I'm playing the game she plays.
She looks at the best of the poems here
Then hands me 0's like she has no fear.
It's not the content
or the rhythm that gets her bent
Or maybe it is
How the FUCK would we know
if she doesn't leave a comment.
But that's just like our friend
To leave the worst possible vote
Like the poem could be written
by her sex partner the goat.
If she doesn't leave a comment, then how d'you know it was her giving you the zero? Ta ta.
P.S.: hmm... started off well, but the last four lines made it lose its charm. You should have spent a little more time there. Only 7/10, sorry.
A 0 does not indicate the worst poem ever built. It represents a remarquably bad poem. And though I don't always concur with my dear friend razorgrin's opinions -- she has made some truly dreadful judgements in the past, both in likes and dislikes -- I'm afraid I must concur that in this case she was right. That WAS a terrible poem you wrote. The fact that a lot of idiotic young goths with bad tastes gave your poem tens does not mean it's a good poem. It means that a lot of young goths have no taste. That's all.
well, i never liked haikus much, but this one.. its like a bad joke that makes a room go silent for a short moment.
no offense, just my opinion. blessed with 5
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