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sick love (Free verse) by Nirvana13666
Inspiration in human form I am infatuated with your touch I am obsessive I have become compulsive, neurotic I would kill on your command I worship your god like ways You have cultivated mass emotions These foreign feelings devour me alive Speak so I can understand the unexplainable Your words pierce through the clouds of confusion I want to be the reason you smile The last person you see I wish I was the first person you ever saw Your eyes tell stories Your presence is overwhelming needed I am in need of your attention And I would do anything to always have it

Up the ladder: By Now
Down the ladder: The Breedling

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 6987
Posted: September 9, 2003 1:23 PM PDT; Last modified: September 9, 2003 1:23 PM PDT
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[7] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.68 | 9-Sep-03/3:31 PM | Reply
I was hoping this poem was going to be about intimacy involving regurgitation. I was sadly disapointed. I pox be on you!
[7] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.146.186 | 9-Sep-03/6:04 PM | Reply
Yikes. Hope this is fiction!
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