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Free verse № 64552

The last journey

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Sep 2003 · 0 comments

On my last journey you left me cold, trembling and confused Whenever darkness emerge I can still recall your bleeding touch that caused so much revolt in my crying veins that they had to rise in a relentless fiery storm. You made my golden eyes fade into shadows concurrently with your absence You used to be my shining star My true obsession I wanted you to save me, and show heaven you were mine But you had to disappear Halfway On my last journey

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