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Free verse № 6460

Forever Tired

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

I'm tired, so very tired Of living this life This lie Is this all I'm tired, so very tired Of feeling this way So empty Will it end I'm tired, so very tired Of being alone Always unseen Is it real I'm tired, so very tired Of having no escape No relief Or is there I'm tired, so very tired Of living this life This lie I must sleep

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[4] horus8 29-Jul-02/12:33 AM Reply
you must. so do. pooc
[0] god'swife 13-Oct-03/6:58 PM Reply
Boring