Dream

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Sep 2003 · 2 comments

Tick...Tick...Tick... Hours to Hours....Minutes to Minutes....Seconds to Seconds.. I'm still counting... Day by days.... Months by months... Year by years... I'm still waiting... I'm still hoping... Waiting for the miracle comes.. Hoping for reaching the star. Tick....tick...tick.... I'm still listening... I'm still watching... Listening to the wind blows... watching to the blue sky... thinking that someday, I can flying and reaching the star.

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[n/a] silvy 11-Sep-03/9:03 PM Reply

I've just want to know about my rank for this poem, so I can more improve in writing. thanks.

[5] http://mulberryfairy 12-Sep-03/10:30 AM Reply

Would you rather have grammatical feedback than numerical scores?