poemranker ::The Gravity of Love by april fool

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The Gravity of Love

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

You can't fall in love due to gravity Though it feels like you're hit on the head When your thoughts turn to lust and depravity When they should be on marriage instead For love is a serious matter Know the difference between love and lust Go for the former not latter And happiness is achievable - just!

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[2] pete 29-Jul-02/11:50 AM Reply
.. somewhat prudish methinks , and the one without the other would make for a cold marriage
[10] ==Doylum 3-Aug-02/4:21 PM Reply
Oh pete pete pete pete pete, your turning me on again stop it.
This poem is a smashing poem and though it pains me to say so Handsome Pete i find it far superior to other drivel I have found on this site, would you not agree. For of the same please april dear
[1] windyone 25-May-05/5:04 PM Reply
let us know when you do