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The Wonderful Creators

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Jul 2002 · 6 comments

If you can make the sun rise I will bring down the rain With arms spread wide we are ready to begin I will watch the sun rise if you will dance in the rain the wonderful creators Yes, we have limitations The pain of weakness can make you scream But water never cries - too immersed in what it is to be anything but wet

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6 comments

[0] Bachus 29-Jul-02/10:38 PM Reply

Since you are my first vote on this site I am going to be lenient. But shouldn't you try? I wish you wouldt

[n/a] abecedarian › Bachus 2-Jul-03/5:35 PM Reply

Oh Bachus, you inspire me
(see Poem Ranker please, I wish you wouldt)

[6] Christof 23-Aug-02/3:28 AM Reply

This is a good moment of negative capability and just living rather than worrying about living. I like it.

[9] http://mulberryfairy 11-Jul-03/8:30 PM Reply

It's raining in Baltimore, so I'll dance in the rain if you'll watch the sun rise. Watch out for pupil scarring. This would make a good song.

[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> 15-Aug-03/4:08 PM Reply

Exciting.

[10] eliastemplar 26-Aug-03/9:47 AM Reply

Simple, beautiful, a breath of fresh air. Almost mental music. (10)