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New Sneakers in the Night

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Sep 2003 · 1 comment

On the darkened silver night, toes they did creep. Upon dampened shimmering grass, in brilliant white sneakers. Shuffling dew drops towards the moon. Down again like shooting stars, gravity enforced to the ground. Till finally on cemented rock, the pavement they had found.

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[0] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 23-Sep-03/4:29 AM Reply
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