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Thinking for you

by J.B. Manning

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Sep 2003 · 2 comments

Every time I try to rhyme I spit forth This bile and slim And lock the doors Inside my mind The keys to which I cannot find And madness asks me Where the hell I’ve been

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[8] horus8 29-Jun-04/12:04 AM Reply
Actually, not bad, it's a shame your ass aint rad.
Like mine, in lime, for niggers thirsting -- a lemon fizzy blast of white crack and pink ass.
[7] Skamper 23-Mar-07/9:52 PM Reply
Just Out! Standard answer...

did you forget the 'e' in slime?