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Break Me

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Sep 2003 · 4 comments

Father break me Throw me down to my knees Father show me What it is to be humbled by your name Break me and heal me whole I seem so unworthy to speak a name so pure Throw me upon my knees so I can start over again Father break me I need the shame to begin again right Father break me I am lost and prideful Humble me with your anger Humble me with your love Humble me with your voice Father break me make me different Fill my heart with your love and break me

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[n/a] Joe-joe 28-Sep-03/2:33 PM Reply
You will not receive salvation/redemption by being "broken" or taken to task by your earthly or heavinly Father. Self reflection and discipline will get you where you want to go...Then, if you are worthy,.. your "Father" will be willing to converse with you. Stop being a jelly fish! You need a spine to stand up on your own two feet!
[3] baphomet 28-Sep-03/2:46 PM Reply
someone got daddy issues.
[n/a] Freethinker1602 28-Sep-03/6:15 PM Reply
Some times people that cannot follow god's ways and cannot stop themselves must be broken. Then you can follow him wholey. God is always willing and there. What god do you know?
[6] jacqui 28-Sep-03/10:01 PM Reply
definitely a good idea. it could be better but then again couldn't everything