poemranker ::soulmates by casey

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Free verse № 69445

soulmates

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Oct 2003 · 1 comment

there are people out there that hear you say hello and know that something's wrong they look into your eyes and see the pain and keep you from going crazy insane they show you when you need it how much they really care drop everything to call you back when your in deep despair raise up the phone bill just to make the tears stay away they let you cry for forever and a day no matter what was wrong they help you smile not right away.. tears last a while but people that make you smile through your tears are people that stay through all the years

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[7] Shuushin 9-Oct-03/8:17 PM Reply
A host of truisms with a greeting card feel - what can be wrong about that?

small nit/typo: "your" in L6 s/b "you're"