sex sex sex!

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Oct 2003 · 4 comments

Red-lipped and lovely, she wrapped herself around me. a breadbasket continental shelf shifted below as i struggled for Footing. Blue-lipped and lonely, i cringed as your fingers touched me. isolated on the ocean floor i withered below, and my bubbles were Bursting. White-lipped and lively, she strapped her legs around me. a rickety wooden floor creaked below and i begged for Mercy. Black-lipped and lewdly, i pine for you to soothe me. clawed eyes cauterized burned below. i blindly sang, I'm Empty.

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[9] Shuushin 10-Oct-03/6:01 AM Reply

The only better title I can think of is "beer, beer, beer" (j/k).

Another really nice bit of work. Cool format - it suits the piece.

[n/a] Caducus 10-Oct-03/9:04 AM Reply

if you add the word no between each of the words in the title you would have written a short poem about my life.

[9] Bachus 10-Oct-03/1:34 PM Reply

Some good poems today from you, congratulations. 9

[0] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 10-Oct-03/5:33 PM Reply

Wow! I would never have guessed that someone would have experienced sex!