poemranker ::twelve years of public school in one dream by calliope

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Free verse № 70563

twelve years of public school in one dream

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Oct 2003 · 1 comment

kindergarten classrooms used by night as college dorm rooms. smoking lounges, smokey-smelling crayon drawings on the wall. run to school and run right back, race the bus i never rode it anyway. disposable cameras, disposable friends, trash on the floor, desks used as ashtrays. the room is surrounded by yellowing plastic toys. and stuffed in dirty party cups: book reports and cigarette butts.

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[7] Bachus 16-Oct-03/4:06 PM Reply
WEll, so you don't like cigarettes? poopy doppy do.