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Haiku № 71258

Autumn

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Oct 2003 · 2 comments

Silent nests in fleshless trees, Which shed dry green tears In a crying wind.

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[10] INTRANSIT 20-Oct-03/6:47 AM Reply
I just learned that leaves are actually the alter color and that the spring "stresses" them into the green. Great haiku. whose counting syllables anyway.
[9] Bachus 16-Nov-03/1:40 AM Reply
Different.