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lame ass shit

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Oct 2003 · 1 comment

she says the way she deals with things is by walking away so she walked away and i sat here, a quivering and pathetic mess. because the way i deal with things is by begging forgiveness, so i begged for forgiveness. but she just hung up. so here i sit thinking lame ass shit.

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[4] poetandknowit 21-Oct-03/7:54 PM Reply
See the Bitch! poem comment of using a title as a final tag line and ultimately a young cop out for a poem that would probably work better as a lyric.