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Life Jade

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Aug 2002 · Edited 31 Aug 2002 · 1 comment

I`ve walked through centuries where I wished I could fly Now that I`m old and done I want only to die I`ve seen friends come, go, and leave me alone Now I want this curse to lift and turn to me bone Every night before I go to sleep I pray I ask that come sun rise I be left out of that day I`ve done it all and seen what there is to see I only wish life was done holding onto me None of my memories are gone and none faded But knowing everything in life leaves you life jaded

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[10] Bachus 1-Sep-02/6:32 PM Reply

i say ten! cuz of the fourth line. a mistake that saved the piece. 10/10/10/biglistlessbirds.l