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Free verse № 7168

Thinkin of ya!

by KezzY20

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Aug 2002 · 6 comments

I MET YOU NOT TOO LONG AGO. SOMETHING MADE ME WANT TO KNOW SOMEONE LIKE YOU TO TOUCH AND HOLD. I THOUGHT ABOUT YOU FOR ENDLESS HOURS, PICTURING YOU HOLDING FLOWERS AND HUGS AND KISSES I WOULD SHOWER. YOU WOULD TAKE ME TO MY FAVORITE PLACE, THE ONE WITH ALL THE FRILLY LACE, AND DANCE ALL NIGHT IN EACH OTHER'S ARMS, FOR YOU KEEP ME FROM HARM WITH YOU ADORING EYES AND YOUR SUBTLE CHARMS. I THOUGHT WHAT IT WOULD BE LIKE TO KNOW YOUR HEART. WOULD YOU LET ME HOLD IT HERE IN THE DARK? WOULD WE NEVER BE APART? THEN I THOUGHT HOW IT WOULD FEEL TO KNOW SOMEONE LOVED ME AND KEPT IT REAL. I AM ALWAYS DREAMING OF THAT ONE SPECIAL DAY WHEN WE MEET AND YOU CHASE MY BLUES AWAY. BUT FOR NOW I AM THINKING OF YOU.

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6 comments

[n/a] <~> 1-Aug-02/10:59 AM Reply
PLEASE. STOP. NOW. BEFORE SOMEONE GETS HURT.
[0] razorgrin 1-Aug-02/11:11 AM Reply
why do you KEEP writing this crap?just sit in the dark and masturbate like the others like yourself.
[0] waltfreakinwhitman 1-Aug-02/12:15 PM Reply
This poem is so awful, I just gouged my own eyes out. With a spoon. If I never see another poem like this again, then it was well worth it.
[2] Amelia 1-Aug-02/12:39 PM Reply
For the fact that you typed this poem i'm giving you 2, it is too naive.
[7] little_big_nose 4-Jan-04/6:11 PM Reply
This could have only been written by someone in love
[3] windyone 25-May-05/4:26 PM Reply
nice sentiments..prepsre for bashing comments from others