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Free verse № 72

I like Cake

by skaskowski

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 6 comments

the universal eye dangles from a chain swinging with a gravity of its own. it sees every mistake and every little thing that was ever done that will ever be said or done. eye aye aye aye what an eye. What a guy! He's got a big big eye. Universal! if he cry aye ayed... it would be big big tears what huge tears! like a raining storm of water droplets. Universal!

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6 comments

[n/a] deleted user 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply
I feel like there's some joke here that I'm missing. Kind of has a flow, though.
[4] anonymous 10-May-02/9:11 AM Reply
yeah. check out s.2.
[7] horus8 9-Aug-02/11:11 PM Reply
nobody eats sherbert anymore
[n/a] razorgrin 10-Aug-02/5:54 AM Reply
I eat sherbert all the time.It's yummy.
[10] god'swife 22-Aug-02/11:16 PM Reply
The 1st paragraph gets a ten. The rest doesn't
[n/a] skaskowski › god'swife 15-Sep-02/9:46 PM Reply
aww, i thought she loved me. damn.