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Fulfilling the destiny

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Oct 2003 · 15 comments

It happened. For no apparent reason the male psyche changed, and men stopped doing unnacceptable things. They stopped going to strip clubs. They stopped going to hookers. They stopped buying porn in all forms. No movies. No magazines. No peep shows. Not just a few men. All men. And all successive men would be born "neutral". The shift didn't stop there. Men stopped looking at women in any manner of sexuality. They stopped needing, or even wanting sex. There was no sex in marriages, and men stopped accepting favors and hired according to capability. They stopped donating at sperm banks, and rendered their testicles non-manufactory.

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[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 30-Oct-03/10:08 AM Reply
That's odd? I read this same thing tattood upon
-=Dark_Angel=-'s reddening rump last week during one of our bi yearly Christian retreaties.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <{Baba^Yaga}> 30-Oct-03/10:11 AM Reply
Was it all on one cheek? Or spread 'cross in linear fashion.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> › INTRANSIT 30-Oct-03/10:12 AM Reply
That's just it. He only has one.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 30-Oct-03/10:11 AM Reply
The reason was, of course, acute vaginal terror brought on by a future tongue disease called MAIDS.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <{Baba^Yaga}> 30-Oct-03/10:12 AM Reply
Christian maids? never heard of 'em.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> › INTRANSIT 30-Oct-03/10:14 AM Reply
GLAIDS.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <{Baba^Yaga}> 30-Oct-03/10:16 AM Reply
As long as you use glad hands, they're not a problem.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <{Baba^Yaga}> 30-Oct-03/10:15 AM Reply
Maxxillofacialangiointrauterinedeloposis syndrome.

also known as Bannannabigscrosis.
[10] kingit 30-Oct-03/2:55 PM Reply
10!- for throwing Cro-Magnon to a yet, more primordial form!
[4] poetandknowit 30-Oct-03/6:39 PM Reply
Decent idea presented in rather generic fashion.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › poetandknowit 31-Oct-03/8:40 AM Reply
Why would I want to beautify the end of the world? And as you have mentioned, it is only a (decent) idea. Not great. just decent. I'm still waiting for my mediocrity code. lol.
[4] poetandknowit › INTRANSIT 31-Oct-03/8:51 AM Reply
I wasn't asking you to beautify the end of the world as you like. I said you had a decent idea and I believe that is worth something. I just think the poem in style is rather generic.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › poetandknowit 31-Oct-03/8:55 AM Reply
Style as in hugging the left wall? Break it up more? Or try some coloration of lines: They stopped going to hookers. There was no more night business on the corners.
[4] poetandknowit › INTRANSIT 31-Oct-03/9:01 AM Reply
I, for one, will never stop going to hookers.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › poetandknowit 31-Oct-03/9:05 AM Reply
I was goint to use the solar storm as a "reason". Bastard Horus beat me to it.