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Free verse № 73240

sin

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Nov 2003 · 1 comment

blood under my fingernails so full of original sin that my hands tremble at the thought of being inside you again will god be angry with what i have done? even though i was capricious, merely seeking fun? i await judgement

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[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 2-Nov-03/8:03 PM Reply
Even a dung beetle wouldn't roll this shit.