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my stuff is like stuff

Member since 2001 · Posted 4 Nov 2003 · 5 comments

my blood is like metal surrounding my bones. my spit is like poison corroding my throat. my breath is like viruses growing inside. my thoughts are like oceans of cranial tides. my words are like glass as they rip out your brain. my song is like sulfur, it soothes you from pain. my lips are like razors your neck slit in strips. my gaze is like water, like poison it drips.

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Nov-03/1:40 AM Reply
What are you shedding good poetry for fermented toad tit?
[7] deleted user 4-Nov-03/6:38 AM Reply
Great image 'my lips are like razors your neck slit'

Sul(ph?)fur soothes?
[7] Patsy 4-Nov-03/1:00 PM Reply
Owie! but good. imagery. mm.
[5] fair12 4-Nov-03/2:28 PM Reply
too much reminding me of "my body's like whoa". Hip hop it's not but - interesting. the last line didn't work for me - you've already mentioned the spit dripping poison and all I could see was pussing eyes...nope, not a pretty site.
[n/a] skaskowski › fair12 5-Nov-03/12:01 AM Reply
oh yeah, i was redundant wasnt i? shit