unsung love

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Nov 2003 · 6 comments

night turns into morn around us the world has grown some dies and some are born yet my love for you is still not shown sitting straight in my throne i stare at you until you are gone leaving me all alone my love for you unknown

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 7.14 weighted 5.58 rank 2396 views 164 View voting details →

7 votes so far. Yours would make 8.7 votes so far

6 comments

[n/a] khuscen 6-Nov-03/12:06 PM Reply

this girl broke my heart . . .

[0] Shardik 6-Nov-03/1:26 PM Reply

This is a wonderfull tribute to a dung beetles favourite task. Rolling poop.

[n/a] deleted user 6-Nov-03/2:53 PM Reply

Shams loves you you know.

[7] sliver 6-Nov-03/4:41 PM Reply

I've has women drive me away with that piercing glare. Makes me shiver.

[10] deleted user 7-Nov-03/10:09 PM Reply

VeRy ImOrTiOnAl

[5] Jill Stockinger 28-Dec-20/2:05 PM Reply

(some die, not dies)