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I don't like fish

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Nov 2003 · 7 comments

I watched the guppies swim erratically. I wanted to join them. I stuck my head into the fishtank and opened my mouth as wide as I could. Then closed and swallowed tank water and three small fish. An hour later I didn't feel so well, so I went to the bathroom and threw up in the sink. Three half digested fish and some yellow soupy colored tank water. I felt worse.

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7 comments

[8] SupremeDreamer 6-Nov-03/1:08 PM Reply
Bad sushi.. did you ask yourself if you had gills first? could have been a good idea.

Heres an eight.
[9] Shardik 6-Nov-03/2:05 PM Reply
I felt much much worse then.
[9] J.B. Manning 7-Nov-03/2:11 PM Reply
fish smells like fingers.
[8] Amelia 17-Nov-03/2:56 PM Reply
LoL! Hey INTRANSIT, did you miss me?
all of a sudden I feel sick, I ate sushi this morning. Shit!
[n/a] INTRANSIT › Amelia 17-Nov-03/6:26 PM Reply
yes I did. now are you going to stick around and write poetry? or are you going to let paki scare you off again? stop writing in french. it's cheating and I can't vote if I can't read it. I'll get around to learning a second language eventually. now write!
[10] eyrbare 18-Nov-03/8:05 PM Reply
With the title, I was partly expecting a Dr. Seuss poem. Cute joke poem!
[9] AuntyM 23-Nov-03/7:09 AM Reply
I enjoyed this. Especially the "I felt worse" I like the way you think!!