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Sorry

by tori

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Nov 2003 · 3 comments

Its been awhile since you left, But there's something I just can't get, If I did nothing wrong, like everyone says, Then why do I feel such regret? The countless fights, anger, tears, Replay in my mind until I cry, And I plead with God to forgive me, For not saying I was sorry before you died, Its not that I regret, the way that I felt, For I still believe I was right, I just wish I'd said sorry for everything, And I'll always love you, Dad, with all my might.

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[10] sliver 6-Nov-03/5:52 PM Reply
Yea, I just lost my dad in May, But I was able to be there with him, and I think we were o.k. I still wish it hadn't been so sudden, there were alot of things left unsaid.
[8] Shuushin 6-Nov-03/6:44 PM Reply
A difficult road - and a very nice expression of it.
[7] SupremeDreamer 6-Nov-03/8:21 PM Reply
oi.. my evil powers are really suffering today, and now i feel an urge to add to the dad poems. I'll survive though, and heres a seven.