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Free verse № 75

To Kiss

by Jody Conn

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 37 comments

A languid kiss on swollen lips A glistening pouting flower This honey-scented hooded bud I savor at any hour Like wonderful wine with flavor divine Such moist and marvelous bliss All desires and dreams fulfilled This treasure now mine to kiss jc062001

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37 comments

[2] anonymous 21-Jun-01/11:42 PM Reply
simple, but pretty; I like! =)
[2] anonymous 27-Jun-01/5:02 AM Reply
Don't like the line "I savor at any hour"
[2] anonymous 27-Jun-01/6:16 PM Reply
red hot A+, very erotic
[2] anonymous 28-Jun-01/7:32 PM Reply
mmmm...hot
[2] anonymous 29-Jun-01/12:54 PM Reply
mmmmmm...yes
[2] anonymous 11-Apr-02/10:17 AM Reply
Nice rythm
[6] mikejedw 21-May-02/8:56 AM Reply
Holy Georgia O'Keeffe, Batman! The line "I savor at any hour" doesn't scan well, but, otherwise, I like it.
[n/a] Roisin 9-Jul-02/12:09 PM Reply
Erotic without being at all smutty, well done!
[n/a] razorgrin 10-Jul-02/1:54 PM Reply
I need a cold shower.
[5] deleted user 12-Jul-02/8:19 AM Reply
Couple lines don't scan, but heart's in the right place
[8] deleted user 12-Jul-02/9:41 AM Reply
your heart and your words are in the place
[9] webguy 22-Jul-02/8:26 AM Reply
your poem is a case in point that clich??s and worn out adjectives and metaphors can still work. Good Job!
[9] Amelia 25-Jul-02/9:15 AM Reply
OMG! OH MY!
[9] hamgurl 28-Jul-02/6:35 PM Reply
romanitc poem
[5] horus8 28-Jul-02/9:16 PM Reply
"holy carpet munchers batman". said the boy squanderer. I better tighten my utility belt and mask!" quirked the dark knighty night. i say three maybe. maybe. not. 2 for your poo.
[9] Sigh'ense... 30-Jul-02/4:12 PM Reply
VERY LOVELY INDEED
[10] Alan2168 1-Aug-02/3:09 AM Reply
I'm new to this site, and I think its fantastic....simple is not easy to achieve whilst still having a vivid message....write more Jody
[10] purplestain 4-Aug-02/10:06 PM Reply
very detailed indeed....and really beautiful
[10] purplestain 4-Aug-02/10:06 PM Reply
very detailed indeed....and really beautiful
[10] purplestain 4-Aug-02/10:07 PM Reply
very detailed indeed....and really beautiful
[8] yoda's aprentice 9-Aug-02/11:28 AM Reply
u suck horus, good poem jody well done
[5] horus8 9-Aug-02/11:50 AM Reply
yoda jr.yoda jr.yoda jr. it would be pointless and slumming in my mind to retort. therefore, i shall instead compliment you on your incredible ability to speak so clearly, so in depth, and all with out a tongue!
(he lost it giving cpr to a seizure stricken fellow Mcdonald's employee) you my friend are a trooper. grunt with pride! sign with joy! your love of your fellow man goes beyond the call of duty. the extra mile. this buds for you. <brought to you by tic-tic the only insecticide breath mint created to date accidentally.>
[n/a] SoulSlippedAway 20-Aug-02/11:18 AM Reply
I liked that
[9] ben 24-Aug-02/9:39 AM Reply
OK-9/10
[5] Katie 28-Aug-02/6:23 PM Reply
I love your poem!
[8] PawnedTidal 8-Sep-02/8:45 AM Reply
Short and simple, but oh so sweet! 8
[8] jlanza 12-Sep-02/6:43 PM Reply
very nice, and finally a poem that isn't so dark and depressing!
[7] royalflesh 12-Sep-02/7:13 PM Reply
where's the "dark and depressing" part. I have seemed to have missed it. All is well. Behave! Behave!
[10] deleted user 23-Sep-02/6:37 PM Reply
This is so sweet and really nice. I like it ALOT!
[0] poetandknowit 27-Sep-02/8:35 PM Reply
This poem is horrible!!!!
[5] Reuben Spiteri 6-Oct-02/1:55 AM Reply
your words and your hearth are in tune
[3] strider1 9-Oct-02/11:48 AM Reply
I hate to say it , I agree with poet-bloke-thinks-he-knows it all. Tripe !
[9] Mutant_X 19-Oct-02/5:18 AM Reply
i loved it
[9] cleverdevice 27-Nov-02/2:22 AM Reply
Wow, very sensual and almost fine erotica.
[10] Ranger 13-Dec-02/4:23 AM Reply
So, horus8 and poetandknowit, care to explain the problems with this? Constructive criticism is part of what this site's about.
[n/a] Bachus › Ranger 13-Dec-02/3:38 PM Reply
horus8 is preparing for a coors light audition, Ranger, so i will be speaking on his behalf, first off, the poem is a sure dandy, but the serial number at the bottom unless it means June, 2001 by jody conn (which it does whoops!) so back to first off again ah...i don't think 'jody' needs any constructive criticism..i believe that she has a fine grasp on her writing and is aware of what she's doing, so back to why horus8 hated the poem in is words "cheesy vagina banter best left for dike bars or a stage performance of the vagina monolouges" here is it's male coonter part in two minutes using two of my five last braincells [To Blow (free verse) by Bachus

A hard blow on whithered shaft.
A lackluster sobbing rod.
This turd-scented naked pud.
I suck by the hour.
Like pittiful piss with tasteless dour.
Such hard and dispicable horror.
All lust and visions abandoned.
This Richard (dik) never ours to blow.

BFD122002

but now feeling exhausted from the strain of writing that equally inspiring piece, Ranger...i will nap..here's a ten for your earnest..hopes, dreams, sense of justice..merry christmas.10! <for the amount of layers involved in it all well the two layers, anyway>
[10] Ranger › Bachus 8-Jan-03/1:24 AM Reply
Please, PLEASE submit your version, Bachus...it will definately get a ten from me!