poemranker ::Hurricane by angel_uy

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 75673

Hurricane

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Nov 2003 · 0 comments

Everything to be said Time ripped away, A stab to the heart Emotions are lost. Something better has come way, Impossible comprehension A blood tear trickle down, A storm come to follow. Chasing the shadows In the depths of sorrows, Change crashes through Tearing love away. Ready to give up Pain piercing deep, Dissconnected from the world. Achieving dreams, left unstable Too much lost, for whats being gained. Longing for what was had Eating away until nothings left, No one around, only a sea of black. Shivers of fear, sighs of gloom What's left of life, Means nothing to me.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 3.00 weighted 4.76 rank 11647 views 109 View voting details →

3 votes so far. Yours would make 4.3 votes so far

0 comments

Nobody has said anything yet.