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Spuna (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
With the heart of a fish, and the mind of a spoon. Spuna wreaks havoc along the countryside. Scaring beef, amusing poultry, and making farmers scratch their heads. Up ahead, in the distance... Looms a looming metropolis of loomless inhabitants. Spuna, eyes the buildings bare, exposed, heaving sides. And put's on it's apron to advertise. "Spuna" The spread to bet your future on.

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.333333
Weighted score: 6.6666665
Overall Rank: 542
Posted: November 17, 2003 6:51 PM PST; Last modified: November 17, 2003 7:01 PM PST
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[10] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 17-Nov-03/7:37 PM | Reply
:o) but cud do better with the end ( but ill just give u a 10)
[9] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46 | 18-Nov-03/8:04 AM | Reply
Wait, I'll get my wallet. What are the current shares at?
[6] FreeFormFixation @ 98.212.148.58 | 29-Jul-08/3:03 AM | Reply
eh
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