poemranker ::The Mystery of My Bobble Headed Doll by CouchPotato

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The Mystery of My Bobble Headed Doll

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Nov 2003 · Edited 21 Nov 2003 · 3 comments

He is a bobble headed doll A spring-loaded action packed Jumping bean with a rigid spine Glued to the back of my 67 Chevy Smiling at all the passers by Waving at the traffic line With that perpetual nod and that painted face Extending greetings while he stands in place Is he the Palgiacchi of our time? Or is he the man he appears to be? Oh if he could only unfold with that varnished smile.

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[8] eyrbare 21-Nov-03/7:30 AM Reply
Can visualize the scene very well. Good job! =D
[9] horus8 21-Nov-03/6:28 PM Reply
Healing are we? Yes, poetry is magical that way.
[9] INTRANSIT 22-Nov-03/10:07 AM Reply
Spun me right round with the bobble -head and couch potato theme. almost passed you up.
intelligently wacky.