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Murder means oil for Bush's coffer (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme
Roguery brews in the depths- feel like going to war? Offer suburban concrete blood of whore? Perhaps bash pedestrians with a car-door? Can already smell the scent of curdling gore and taste the lipstick that most abhor. Murder creeps in silence, without screams- only gasps from stifled breathing. Embrace the storm slowly seething, give life and vigor to taboo dreams. Its healthy- and good for the economy. (good to have an excuse to engage in open abuse) Its a lot like gardening; weeds need to be pulled, and soil enjoys shovels stir. Donate corpses- Bush needs more oil for his jeweled coffer. Teach the meek to rock'n'roll. Enforce population control- Jesus says its good for the soul. Coked out grim-reaper on the prowl, head covered in the glowin cowl. Iron scythe damp from a night's incising, graveyard shift ended with the suns rising. Upset the calm stillness, make America pure. blade or projectile- murder is a cure isn't it fun to be hostile? Everyman owns a shadow; from darkness comes light, flee and it will only follow.

Up the ladder: Common ground.
Down the ladder: Lachrymalia

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.8
Overall Rank: 1699
Posted: November 23, 2003 8:19 AM PST; Last modified: November 23, 2003 8:19 AM PST
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[10] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.105 | 23-Nov-03/11:07 AM | Reply
Grrrr. This is well done, but, I am qite tiring of the war theme. Maybe I'm tiring of the war.>.<

Where is -=Dark_Angel=- to alleviate this stress?
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.160.178 > INTRANSIT | 23-Nov-03/11:17 AM | Reply
Caducus was who got my brain crankin on war damnit! Send that cursed angel to him- had more than my fair share of time dabbling with that evil feathered foe of mine.

Plus anyway... I've heard him say pretentious and "dunce/dim-wit/retard" enough times to predict the gist of what he'll say.. usually.
[n/a] Nitroxide @ 68.10.211.74 | 23-Nov-03/3:50 PM | Reply
Sweet!!!
[7] Caducus @ 195.92.168.163 | 24-Nov-03/3:13 AM | Reply
More of a rant than a poem, however I can rant and this for the most part flows like still nudes to the eye. 7
[10] The_Third_Isis @ 24.126.116.54 | 24-Nov-03/12:41 PM | Reply
As the song goes. WAR huhh what is it good for?.Coming from a place that altough the natural beauty will enchant most,the sight of a cute little donkey packed with gladiolas,carnations,and exquisite long stemm roses, can mean a donkey bomb/death as you savour your perfectly brewed mountain grown at your favorite cafe Y OLE ! GOOOOL by te guerrilleros. X'cuse my grammar &spelling but in any language.
"upset the calm stillness" is understood,I like your words and truth' amigo."Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity.And Iam not sure about the former.-Albert Einstein.(Tiger grrroowwl) CIAO!
[n/a] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.166.172 > The_Third_Isis | 24-Nov-03/8:20 PM | Reply
Einstein believed in the afterlife? energy does not die; it changes form. Found that to be interesting- his quotes? these ones make me grin:

"The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education."

"Imagination is more important than knowledge."

"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."

"A question that sometimes drives me crazy: am I? or are the others crazy?"
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