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Free verse № 76384

Second Sight

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Nov 2003 · 3 comments

In the many hazes of a world enfatuated with power The bitter taste of life so sour A guiding light of ignorance emerges Corporations playing games with petty lives Continue merging and merging The light of blindness submerges... The door of chance is always open The errors of my past life which im still coping Lies stuck in my throat,always choking Mortal gods,Dictating presidents always posing Dialating eyes,deceiving lies Derail my destination Broke due to commercial persuation Constant reminders of worlwide cryptic cancer Unconcience hypnotic propaganda Who is it you want to lure? Who are your commercials truly for? My second sight invisions A diffrent image A censored sound Deeper meanings more profound The future that awaits my soul Past my body...inhale knowledge as a shotie The existing demons within us covered with green greed,laced lust Lighting forsees our doom Thunder roars its warnings Rotting corpses plague our streets Faint hearts falling in fear Crawling in a opressed atmosphere Seduced by sleep Suprised by death Everyone shall shed their tear before their last breath... You see it as mere blood spilled for war... I see it as a fading world That has no idea what their dying for...

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3 comments

[7] kingit 26-Nov-03/7:02 AM Reply
.....four content, deductions four sp. abiguities
[n/a] Nitroxide 26-Nov-03/6:46 PM Reply
thanx.
[7] Caducus 27-Nov-03/3:19 AM Reply
typo line 2.

Admirable sentiment, this if more concise could pack a harder punch, nevertheless i liked where you went with it.7