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Im gonna draw a picture w/ a twist

by ShelliAnne

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Nov 2003 · 2 comments

Im gonna draw a picture, A picture with a twist. Ill draw it with a razor blade, Ill draw it on my wrist. As I draw this picture, A fountain will appear. And as this fountain flows, My troubles dissappear.

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[n/a] horus8 28-Nov-03/1:32 PM Reply
lol. Indeed, as will your relationship with the house cleaner.
[2] Tintagiles 18-Mar-05/6:46 PM Reply
I feel I must inform you that isn't much of a twist. Lots of people have done it, dear.