A Good Stretch

Member since 2003 · Posted 29 Nov 2003 · 2 comments

In the most unfathomable fashion the Luck had occasioned me not unlike It ever had before... ambushing me like reptile on rodent sudden surprise! but- I was one happy rat strange kindness, but then, all kindness is... Power was smiling on me a momentary parting of the clouds if only to force acknowledgement of a sun ..& I thought I hated It! She was delicious I bathed in her warm blood elation! alas! then as oddly as she came... she squeezed- into a memory.

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[9] Shuushin 29-Nov-03/2:16 PM Reply

I like it lots - but I struggle for meaning - a sexual encounter?

This thing you do with the line spaces and break... works. A pleasant, inviting cadence.

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[n/a] kingit 29-Nov-03/9:19 PM Reply

only one other has said so-...began unintentionally, I thought IT deterred, but...ffffffffffff. YES- sex, you are a smart feller. I enjoy the bulk of your werk.