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Free verse № 76825

Moving

by kingit

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 Dec 2003 · 4 comments

Lonely moments flow by & empty into rivers -my demise. The Flea, too quick for me leaps! from my leg licks his lips & smiles- rapids roar in his belly & somewhere I Live

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[n/a] kingit 1-Dec-03/10:23 PM Reply
Mind-bending shit!....I've just discovered you! Is there an echo in here?
[8] richa 2-Dec-03/6:06 AM Reply
Not bad this, the best I have seen of yours. To fit all of your poems into this one eccentric style is a mistake, form should not be arbitrary.

For once the form works here I think, the slowness, and also the short length so it doesn't hurt the eyes too much.
[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 2-Dec-03/11:29 PM Reply
Christ.
[n/a] kingit 3-Dec-03/1:21 PM Reply
Christ?- no.- just a representative, doing his shit-work for him.