poemranker ::Everytime by krazymofo321

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Everytime

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Dec 2003 · 3 comments

Everytime is see you, look in your green eyes lifes fine, all my worries arent mine. Everytime I touch you, I think about it so much I want you, I could never get enough. Everytime I kiss you, falling in your grace I love you, dont let my feelings be replaced.

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3 comments

[6] horus8 6-Dec-03/6:04 PM Reply
Wow, you are a mofo.
[7] The_Third_Isis 6-Dec-03/7:45 PM Reply
I say the same damn thang when i look at my pet lobster. Blessed with a 7
[4] dancin_n_da_moonlite 6-Apr-05/9:50 AM Reply
nice sentiment but its really not that original, and sounds kind of pimply