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The Morning Star

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Dec 2003 · Edited 8 Dec 2003 · 13 comments

I met her at the Cross roads. It was well past 2:00. She said, "Where you going boy?" Like she already knew? She was dressed for a funeral, but sure looked fine I didn't dare ask who's Cause it felt like mine. She said, "Won't you join me for a midnight drive?" To which I did. To which I did. She smelled like a graveyard, But shined as the Sun. She handed me a business card, and said, "Are you down for some fun?" But there was no # just a name, "The Morning Star". The Morning Star. And I tasted sulphur. When I spoke her name. She asked, "If I'd make a wager, to have wealth and fame." She offered me a guitar. That she kept in the trunk. Said that, "It was made in Hell by a most sinful monk. She asked me if I "Played?", knowing damn well I did. I said, "I might, if the price was right." (But I had already lost my soul In a previous fight.) "I don't have no money, a job, or a home. I'm just a Gypsy Bard. Born to sing and roam. She said, "Well that's fine, yes, that's quite fine. I'll still make you mine." And she did, the Morning Star. The Morning Star.

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13 comments

[9] SupremeDreamer 8-Dec-03/4:32 AM Reply
be interesting to hear. 9
[n/a] horus8 › SupremeDreamer 9-Dec-03/2:51 PM Reply
Do you want to hear it? Give me your e mail.
[9] SupremeDreamer › horus8 10-Dec-03/9:58 PM Reply
sdreamer@weirdmotherfucker.com (yes, its real)

[n/a] Shardik › SupremeDreamer 12-Dec-03/2:08 AM Reply
Did you get it?
[n/a] The_Third_Isis 8-Dec-03/8:46 AM Reply
Was the monk my" saint" Rasputin/you are a Hungarian gypsy by blood can't get a transfusion.Think I found your soul clinging to mine on an agust night..This is more like you Passionate,bohemian,walking,thinking composing.Tarot the morning star.Ahhhhh holding it in the fresh dirt/musky smell of the grave yard arousing to those of us who have a pulse.This poem is fine and you are forever MINE. more than a nine 10
[10] Shuushin 8-Dec-03/8:34 PM Reply
"I didn't dare ask who's
Cause it felt like mine..."

sweeeet.
[n/a] horus8 › Shuushin 9-Dec-03/2:50 PM Reply
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[9] kingit 8-Dec-03/9:22 PM Reply
Haunting little toe-tapper, with violins, etc!
[n/a] horus8 › kingit 9-Dec-03/2:45 PM Reply
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[9] dragonfly 8-Dec-03/9:57 PM Reply
Hmm...if it's well past 2, then it's not really a midnight drive. A 9 nonetheless!
[n/a] horus8 › dragonfly 9-Dec-03/2:42 PM Reply
The midnight drive is more of a metaphor for going off into the uknown and dark, but I see what you mean thanks. Would you like to hear it? Give me your email.
[9] dragonfly › horus8 9-Dec-03/3:01 PM Reply
Would you like to hear me decline your offer?û
[n/a] horus8 › dragonfly 9-Dec-03/3:22 PM Reply
Do you think I would care?